Audience Feedback
Izzy and I uploaded our draft video on to Youtube for our final piece on the 10th December 2015, and have since received a variety of different views and opinions from our target audience and our media teacher. Our teacher has created a page on google classroom for each group where she can send us feedback and constructive criticism, which has been helpful throughout this process as we can take her advice and ideas into consideration and feature some of them in our work.
Our teacher mentioned that she feels the male character's entrance is slightly cliché and that he isn't essential to the narrative, however this conflicts with feedback we have received from other students and our target audience who believe that his part in the narrative creates lots of tension and suspense and is a strong feature in our footage. Izzy and I reiterate this and believe that Matt's character is necessary to the narrative as his lack of dialogue and sudden entrance adds to the thriller theme of the footage and also adds a narrative enigma as his character is anonymous and mysterious.
Our teacher also disliked the music we have included in our footage as it's "too sinister" for the beginning of our thriller, however Izzy and I have tried a variety of other music clips and the other clips don't work as well with our final piece. We also believe that the music we have chosen creates lots of atmosphere and suspense, which our target audience and multiple students in our class have agreed with.
Our media teacher also suggested we refilm the nail varnish scene and the extreme close up on my eye as they're slightly out of focus, which Izzy and I agree with and are planning to film some time next week to amend this as soon as possible.
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